its pretty lame dude
sounds like you used fruity loops for the drums
the guitar and bass are mediocre, and the vocals are weak and have no strong melody
plus, like BakedDaily said, its hella emo, so even more points deducted

and yeah, the production quality is shit, but hey, sounds like your just starting off







dont quit your day job i guess

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homer: look at shemp, he is so high!
otto: hey shemp is... hemp, spelled backwards!
homer: and otto is... OTTO, BACKWARDS!
otto: ...now im scared.


doesnt the idea of making nature illegal seem a bit, ... unnatural?


Suck it dry!