Hey guys, I've been rhyming for 2 and a half years now, I prefer writting over freestyles considering the upgrade in complexity and multi's/meta's, but I did one the other day, decided to post it on here for a rate.

Most people think I'm actualy not half bad but your opinion is fine with me.

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Hahaha there was something about it I liked, idk what. 7/10

thanks for the reply man..

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my speakers dont work, otherwise i would definitely hear it. sorry, but coming from you its gotta be pretty good

Your voice doesn't suit the beat, but I like it, good rhymes, laid-back flow.

Thanks for the feedback.

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that wasnt bad at all.. there were some points were you stalled a bit but thats pretty tight..

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oh and sorry if that came of negative since I was "hahahahing" it's just funny that someone posted their rap on a cannabis forum. Haha ahahaha I just find it humourus idk why

Yeah I posted it on here just because I wanted to people to know my voice/flow considering I do alot of rhyming in here, mostly in text.

It's all good.

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sounds good man,

try speeding it up 1.4x normal

it sounds amazing

Thanks..

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good shit mayne keep flowin

thanks

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i don't like what u rap about

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don't be content with being a spectator.
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choose a point you've made and destroy it.
or critique the critiques.
destroy the ironclad.

That's straight, I'd just like to know what type of rap you listen to, lol.

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mf doom is probably my favorite rapper

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everything we own,
we have stolen.
we've no regrets.
obscurity and clarity collide.
we've swallowed down these words for too long.
all that is said can be disproved,
and all that's not can be upheld.
don't be content with being a spectator.
speak up and choose a point you've made and expand it.
choose a point you've made and destroy it.
or critique the critiques.
destroy the ironclad.

check out me and my homeboy sir sippa. recorded this back before i started rappin as mista sippi, but it's still jammin shit. i'm first to go, then my boy end the shit. leave some feedback lemme know what yall think if ya like it i might post some others we recorded

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lil breath in the mic but other than that nice. i like teh lyrics *thumbs up*

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yeah we ain't got no money for studio time, so we recorded the shit at my crib (why it sounds like that)

I got more tracks someone let me know if you're interested.

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hmmmm, not what i'm usually into =/ but ok i'd say a 7/10 on the lyricism, but the beat just killed it for me

you know what.. since you're cool... i think i'm gonna make a beat just for you... i hope it doesn't suck XD

nevermind... i got lazy, maybe tomorrow lol

that would be very nice. I'd apreciate it. I use limewire and soon I'm gonna have to pay for official beats for my next tape.

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